I recently watched Veronica Mars and got here after a long and harrowing journey through ancient fandom and eeeee was it worth it! This story is made of awesome, seriously. I love Veronica Mars AUs in concept and this is one of the veeeery few believable ones I've found. I think your characterization is great--I especially appreciate that you haven't glossed over Logan's tendency to be an asshole, because that's such an intrinsic part of him, and part of what makes him a compelling character. Anyway, I hope this comment gives you a little encouragement because you totally deserve it! :) Here's hoping you finish someday...