Wonderful as usual. I loved your Daddy Mars confrontation with Logan. I LOVED that he said that he doesn't forget and that Veronica is a bigger person than him.

Your dialogue is excellent. It's witty, yet realistic.

And what a great way to get Lilly's ticket into Logan's hands! So very inventive. And I really like how Logan and Veronica are equal partners in their investigation.

This is a very smart story. Thanks.